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original sentence

This week’s portion tells the tale of Korach, a Levi who rebelled against Moses and Aaron and, in turn, God himself, when his unbridled ambition obliged him to seek out the priesthood although in fact, Levis couldn’t be priests.


  • source of my sentence is from

Korach—Numbers 16:1-18:32 , Leah Hochbaum Wed. Jun 13, 2007

  • comments about the grammar

they have lots of modification sentence devided by comma,and the sentence is pretty long but it is beautiful.

my own sentence

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